Funeral of Love > when love dies

موضوع: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-19, 11:33 pm

When friendship dies vlove also does.Hence, we don't deserve to live with hearts those unfortunately we don't use,bare hearts.Here's funeral of every thing good to be buried.Lady, you nothing about friendship , you were and still nothing.

I wrote it for the girl,once i saw as apearl
for the gal,conce to say"you are only pal"

Funeral of Love

Full of tears my eyes are wet
smile evaded , joy lessened to abit
shout,scream,tears havenot finished yet
lights now off,candles they held to get
the way to aplacewritten
"Love's cemetry" upon it

silence,mourn,ah
the coffin is up, the whole begged to carry
but there hatred ,envy stand to bury
love.The moment came,lovers to mourn
but here's the caller happy to say
Love is over,over , evil is born

silence , candles up,ah
I feel amassive sadness over me belch
yeah,it's possible that we can jest
i know,you know that we can smile
buthere's some thing inthat chest
tells you no more words bring no rest

Ah, Alas,

is even love to weak
to open the heart ,makes it speak?
Or are lovers scant to reveal
towards whom what they feel?

OO, lovers , O lady
love's now dead, love's now gone
no more kisses, no more fun

but we were on many lines
youand i revealed spirit and power
but you know we didnot met
on one line for merely an hour

you were, those were , we were
baby, now don't fret but keep your distance
away from the meadows once were fair
those soon after we killed love ,the whole turned bare

i wanna to see criticism upon that work > I still appreciate the whole of u

موضوع: رد: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-20, 4:54 am

it is so nice

waiting more

موضوع: رد: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-20, 6:31 am

its very good
thank you marko

موضوع: رد: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-20, 4:48 pm

NICE MARCO
WAITING MORE

موضوع: رد: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-20, 10:19 pm

its great marco, well penned, the title is attractive.
but believe me no one deserves.
live for your self, be happy for your self cause cin the end " no one deserves'"
just a note; when love dies it doensnt create an evil being, its either a miserable broken heart blaming hom self and his life, or a stronger heart with experiences, its the one`s call.

موضوع: رد: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-21, 12:56 am

thanks all ,i really still do appreciate ur adds

but , for no7a el3wady i got to hint that if none not to deserve , we will live like wolves. but , u know and as abare and pure matter of fact it was my belief that none to deserve but fortunately or unfortunately our fate gathers us with others who ,in turn, could change some or exceedingly all of our thoughts if they ought to be changed noha.that's life . it's some thing we can't evade or escape from it's like infection to which makes no use either drug or injection.

frankly, i felt happy owing to ur posts . Noha , i wrote my reply up for ur post to shake some thing in ur mind called me to shake santa

موضوع: رد: Funeral of Love > when love dies 2009-06-22, 5:10 am

very nice words Marco

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